Basically, I hate it. I admire people who can do it, though I am not one of them. I believe the problem lies in my inability to write a story in 50,000 words, let alone 200. Plot! It will be the death of me!
So anyway. On with the challenge!
Write a short story/flash fiction story in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem. Begin the story with the words, “Shadows crept across the wall”. These five words will be included in the word count.
If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), do one or more of these:
- end the story with the words: "everything faded." (also included in the word count) (DONE)
- include the word "orange" in the story (DONE)
- write in the same genre you normally write (DONE)
- make your story 200 words exactly! (DONE)
My "story" (Untitled. As usual.)
Shadows crept across the wall and over the floorboard. They stretched along the hardwood floor and made their way out of the window. Molly pulled the covers up to her chin because it always made her feel more protected, like nothing could get past that orange handmade quilt. It was a suit of armor against the night monsters – those creatures that crawled into her ears and planted nightmares in her brain. They were the opposite of the Sandman, a figure who seemed to never visit Molly.
She jumped at a slight rustling, but it was just the curtain blowing in the breeze. Molly laid her head back on her pillow and, rolling onto her side, curled herself into a ball. Over the years the shadows had shifted. The one on the ceiling used to look like a witch on a broom, but her mom told her it was a good witch. The one on the wall used to resemble a beast with outstretched claws. That one, her mother told her, just wanted to scratch that itch she couldn’t reach.
Molly took a few deep breaths, counting to ten as she did so. Then slowly her eyes closed and everything faded.
*****
Here is something better than that story. A picture I accidentally posted approximately eleven times on Pinterest and then emailed to a friend and is still in my "pictures" folder on my work computer.
This picture is in my "Book Inspiration" board. I bet you want to read my book NOW, right?! Yep.


26 comments:
I LOVE this! You might hate the challenge of writing a flash piece, but you do it really well. And I love the way Molly sees monsters in the shadows, because didn't we all? I really felt like I was in the room with her.
And your book inspiration pic? Um, yummy? :)
I love your flash fiction piece! You did an awesome job!! I love how she tries to remember that the 'monsters' aren't really all that scary. I remember I used to do that :)
I'm entry #19
And as far as your book is concerned, it looks VERY interesting ;)
I really liked this line - "those creatures that crawled into her ears and planted nightmares in her brain" Great job!
I felt the same way about flash fiction, but as I practiced more, it got better. And yours is quite good. Nice one! :)
It's definitely a challenge - but I thought you did well and enjoyed your piece. Nice job.
I love this!! Excellent take on the challenge! :)
I'm #37
"Over the years the shadows had shifted." Great line! This brought back childhood memories. For someone who does not like the doing, you did it well.
I think you did a grand job! Well done!
New follower here. #96 in the campaign.
Awww, this was really sweet! Well done!
The snowman picture more or less summarizes my feelings about flash fiction. But I totally wouldn't have known it wasn't your strength if you hadn't told us...so good for you!
And yes. I absolutely want to read your book now ;)
I liked this a lot so very well done as it isn't your favourite way of writing.
Thanks all! It was fun, but I probably won't be back any time soon. :)
I liked this story a lot! Especially the line "It was a suit of armor against the night monsters – those creatures that crawled into her ears and planted nightmares in her brain." Such vivid imagery, great job!
I love the quilt as a suit of armor. Nice job!
I sear all these shadow stories are getting to me! Last night I was freaked cause of a shadow outside my window. lol. Good job!
Nice job! I like how her mom tried to comfort her.
For someone who does not enjoy flash fiction-you did a great job with it! I love how she found courage with her blanket. I'm #61.
Ok, that is a very inspiring picture! But on to the story. I enjoyed it. I'm not one to stop at 200 words either, so I can relate. Mine is #71
Great job! I can totally relate. When I was little I was okay as long as I pulled the covers up over my head.
Oh, don't be so hard on yourself. Your story was great! I like how she manages to deal with the monsters - this evoked some memories. The shadow of the lampshade on my ceiling looked like a monster with eyes and teeth. By the way, I always thought the sandman sounded creepy too...
I, too, like the little girl's imagination.
I have fallen in love with the challenges that flash fiction gives us. Too often I read things that really need heavy editing. This distills things down to the core. Nice job.
Tale Spinning #58
Hey, I became totally distracted by the hunk on the board, but I still recall the story and found it relative to my childhood memories! Nice job!
because i know that you never procrastinate, I thought i would give you a task to allow for procrastination...
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